VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

Head In The Clouds сказал(а):

I don't think the writing is the problem, the decision making, however, is. Reading through the comments and I agree with one about this mafia arc being an endgame type of storyline. It's just too soon for this type of content, it looks comical seeing a guy who barely knows these girls wanting to risk life life for them. Let us build bonds and relationships first.

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Head In The Clouds сказал(а):

looks comical seeing a guy who barely knows these girls wanting to risk life life for them.

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Wicked Garden сказал(а):

This. If the story itself dropped hints as to what's to come slowly the Mafia plot would've felt better structured to me, if we kept the same pace prior to this arc and saw the mafia plot develop more and more after each update I wouldn't have minded. My problem is a sheltered farm kid was giving too much to deal with, too soon. The decision to just jump right in a violent storyline such as this one, so soon should've been considered more. The MC apparently has a savior complex, I was more concerned with the safety of him than anything. If I knew and cared about people for a certain amount of time, then yes, risking my life for them would seem like a no brainer for me. But to know them for only days? Weeks?

That said, I don't think the writing is bad at all, bad writing gets thrown around a lot but there's a difference to me. If the Mafia arc was total shit and didn't make sense, sure. But from what I've played it's been well executed. Players are just exhausted from it and want it to end if anything.

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AchedCroissant сказал(а):

And without having sex it makes less sense

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Fiufia сказал(а):

Have you ever heard of the mentality of cowards?
which ones do you prefer?

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Zarathos4 сказал(а):

Then there's the ones who cant take a joke.

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Canto Forte сказал(а):

MC can dish it out - exhibited during Adam office scene.
MC can take all the hits - exhibited all over the bruised previews of game of hurt coming up.
Still waiting on the assassins to ... you know .. assassin like in kill bill and we are good.

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Wicked Garden сказал(а):

This. If the story itself dropped hints as to what's to come slowly the Mafia plot would've felt better structured to me, if we kept the same pace prior to this arc and saw the mafia plot develop more and more after each update I wouldn't have minded. My problem is a sheltered farm kid was giving too much to deal with, too soon. The decision to just jump right in a violent storyline such as this one, so soon should've been considered more. The MC apparently has a savior complex, I was more concerned with the safety of him than anything. If I knew and cared about people for a certain amount of time, then yes, risking my life for them would seem like a no brainer for me. But to know them for only days? Weeks?

That said, I don't think the writing is bad at all, bad writing gets thrown around a lot but there's a difference to me. If the Mafia arc was total shit and didn't make sense, sure. But from what I've played it's been well executed. Players are just exhausted from it and want it to end if anything.

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StingerWolf сказал(а):

Would be nice to beat up Mr. Arsehole. Currently the MC looks like beat up crap. Should be the other way around. In BADIK I sometimes even feel sorry for Tybalt. But this jerk here...Would so fulfilling to beat the crap out of him...

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upper25 сказал(а):

no sorry to Tybalt by me. he is stupid moron, but this dick - truly different league.

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StingerWolf сказал(а):

Agree. In a bad way different. But still compare him to this game's jerk, and he seems rather pitiable. He won't walk through corpses...

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Mervolant сказал(а):

Tybalt is less an antagonist than a comic relief. Makes me thing all the male students here are complety underused. What's the point of the buff guy ? He hasn't said or done anything relevant for 4 episodes.

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Mervolant сказал(а):

Tybalt is less an antagonist than a comic relief. Makes me thing all the male students here are complety underused. What's the point of the buff guy ? He hasn't said or done anything relevant for 4 episodes.

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StingerWolf сказал(а):

And no, I am not really convinced that bringing in the mob story in the main story line has been a smart move.

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Raziel_8 сказал(а):

Well u are not alone there, at least it's way to soon in the story for the mob and the psychopath which wants Jenny and MC dead, for no real reason besids having fun... It's not really something u can just put aside and have a happy college life on the side

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Raziel_8 сказал(а):

Well u are not alone there, at least it's way to soon in the story for the mob and the psychopath which wants Jenny and MC dead, for no real reason besids having fun... It's not really something u can just put aside and have a happy college life on the side

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